Wednesday, September 21, 2011

My poem

Once upon a time in a far away land,
There was a very young piece of sand.
He would play all day,
Until he couldn't stay.
One day, his parents said,
"Since you are sick you will have to stay in bed."
The young piece of sand cryed and cryed,
But his parent said they couldn't of lied,
Or he would have fried.
He asked how,
They said that since they live in Moscow.
Finally he understood,
Then he realized thy lived in a piece of wood.
The End

1 comment:

sydney said...

I thought that it was very creative and I think that you had good word choice. You have done a lot of poems so you should start to make them evan longer :)