Stream of conciousness/Poems

 Jewel

I slowly walk into the restaurant. I look around for my date when all of a sudden I notice no one else is in here. I slowly turn around and walk to the door. Right once my hand hits the door some violinists start playing in the background. I quickly turn around. What I see is magnificent. I see my date holding a ring with a sign in front of him saying, Will you marry me? I suddenly feel tears running down my cheeks. I run into his arms and say yes a million times. We finally sit down to have dinner. Once dinner is over we had gotten into the car. I was staring out the window when he slipped his hand into mine. We both give each other a lovingly stare. Then all of a sudden we jerked forward and the car's window broke. The airbags had hit my chest so hard I could hardly breathe. I try to turn my neck to see my fiance but  my the airbag is so big that I just can't. Suddenly I get a huge head ache and I touch my head. I look at my hand and its stained with blood. I start crying hysterically. From out of no where I hear someone scream, "We just called an ambulance, they will be here soon."



I suddenly get really tired and right before I close my eyes I see the flashing lights of the ambulance. Suddenly I wake up again, but this time I'm not in the car, I'm in a hospital. I slowly look around and notice that I have like 5 cords going into each arm. I lift up one of my arms and touch my  head only to feel a bandage wrapped around it. Suddenly my door opens and a doctor walks in. He says hi and then starts to tell me what happened.



I had gotten into a car crash and had cut open my head broke my leg and sprained my wrist. He said that I had been the luckier one. I suddenly feel my stomach drop. I quietly asked the doctor what had happened to my fiance. He said that he had hit his head on his steering wheel and cut open his forehead . He had died instantly. I feel my stomach drop down even further, and I start crying uncontrollably. He said to calm down but I can't. I just can't. He puts something into one of the cords and I fall asleep. 



When I wake up for the second time it's the middle of the night and they had finally taken out all of the cords. I slowly get up from the bed and walk to the sink. I look around all the cabinets until I find the pills I'm supposed to take. I open the cap and eat all the pills. I slowly walk back to the bed getting dizzier after each step. Once I reach the bed I lay back in it and fall asleep. I fall asleep forever.
 Stones
I slowly wake up and look around. My vision is kind of blurry and the floor is kind of rocky. When I open my mouth to breath water flows into my mouth and into my body. I quickly close my mouth and try to move. My feet are stuck onto something. I look down and notice how I'm attached to a piece of plastic. Slowly my vision gets better and soon I see that I have bars covering my face. I try to scream for help but only bubbles come out of my mouth and water takes their place. I try to look around but my neck won't move. Suddenly something large and scary flashes by. I can feel my stomach drop as IU see its shadow circling around me. Then all of a sudden, Boom! The thing nails my chest and I tip over. On my way down I notice that it’s a fish. A beta fish. When I stuggle to get up a giant hand slowly  dips into the water and picks me up and takes me out she sets me down on the dresser and I look at my self in the mirror. Then something terrible happens. I notice I'm that little scuba diver I always make fun of in our fish tank. Then I notice that the giant hand belongs to a loved one, it belongs to my mom.I try to scream for her and tell its me but she doesn't hear me. And I realize she never will. She slowly puts me back into the fish tank as I sink to the bottom I get ready for the rest of my life. My life as a plastic scuba diver.
Clouds



As I hear my husband pulling the rope to the heated air bring up our balloon higher and higher through the clouds and I think of how lucky I am to have him. We take a break and start to eat lunch when out of no where, BOOM! Thunder and lighting start to play a violent type of music around us. Then quickly after it starts to play that horrible music the rain starts to beat down on us like the beating of a hundred drums. We quickly try to find the nearest land but we don't see any for miles. Suddenly something really bright had blinded us and the next thing we now we are plummeting to the ground. When we hit the ground we both flew opposite direction and the hot air balloon pretty much exploded. I try to stand up but I feel to dizzy so I sit down for a quick nap. Soon later I woke up and noticed that the storm had passed and the sky is bright blue. I slowly stand up and start looking for my love.  I quickly stop him and rush over. It looks like he was in the explosion. I check his pulse and he's gone. I try to think where I am and I realize the worst thing ever. I'm stranded on a deserted island…. Alone.

Valentine's Day
Author's note: In this piece I would like to have high proficient sentence fluency, and  good creativity.

On this very special day,
You go out of your way,
to make your special person happy,
so they'll introduce you to their pappy.
You serenade them with poems,
But they only give you combs.
While you give them your heart,
they will only tear it apart.
But on this very special holiday,
you will forget how they  had to betray.
Because,  Nothing will ever change the sky from blue.
Just as nothing will ever change my love for you.




















2 comments:

Unknown said...

I really enjoy reading your stream of consciousness pieces. You are doing an excellent job of liberating your mind, making writing a more natural act. Before you post these, I would highly recommend that you review the material and develop the pieces so that there is an introductory element, conclusion element, and some sort of organization, some paragraphing. If you need help with any of these aspects, see me and I will be glad to help. Well done overall.

Unknown said...

I think the layout is also cool.