Author's note: In literature group my group and me
started to read Heaven
is for Real and we had to write a piece
to it. I am trying to have good organization so I don't have run on sentences
and bad paragraphs. I am also trying to have good Idea development and content.
I would like to have this
I slowly put the car
to a stop and park it. I turn off the ignition as my kids jump out of the car.
I slowly climb out of my car seat, and follow my kids into this bug farm. I
call out for my kids to stop and wait for their mother and me. They stop only to
play on a big exo-skeleton of a giant bug on the outside of the museum. My wife
and I jogged to them and pried them off. Once we had got them off we went to
buy our tickets.
Once we arrived
inside my kids just stand there in awe. We practically have to drag them away
from each exhibit to the next one. Once we finish up all the exhibits my kids
drag us to there favorite exhibits of the day. Soon afterwards we hear a voice
over the announcements exclaiming, "The museum will be closing in 15
minutes."
We slowly drag our
kids out of the museum and to our car. Once we hit the road we decide to stop
for dinner and ice cream. Once we stop there we get out of the car we head
inside. Once we arrive inside we order our dinner and find our seats. Once we
get our dinner we mow it down right away. Once all the food is gone we all
order a ice cream cone for the road. We walk to our car and hit the road with
memories from today still clear in our heads.
